Hi- RWC update

Hi everybody! Sorry I haven't written in a while. I've been busy. Here's part of a story I just wrote:

The Silver Knight

Once there was a boy named Adam. He did the usual, school and sports. Every day in class he would daydream about strange things happening to him. But nothing ever happened, until one fall day...

Adam was running to the bus stop, shoving a piece of toast down his throat. When he reached his rock he had a buttery ring around his mouth. Adam wiped his mouth. He was waiting for the bus a long time. Isn't this a little late for the bus? He was just about to walk back home when out of nowhere came the sound of a horse. Clip Clop. Clip Clop. Then out of the mist came a tall, sleek black horse, with an actual knigt in shining armor upon it's back. Adam rubbed his eyes. This couldn't be happening- not to him at least. This only happened in fairy tales. "I'm here for Adam." said the knight in an unusual voice. "I take it you're him?" Adam just gaped at the knight in amazement. "Better close your mouth young gent or you'll catch flies." Adam snapped his mouth shut, blushing a light pink. "Well, uh, why are you here for me." "I'm here to take you to the sea of sadness." the knight replied. "The sea of what?" Adam asked, shocked. "Sadness!" "But where is this 'sea'?" "Why, if you jump upon my horse I shall take you for a ride my friend." Adam hesitated. Then jumped on the horse. "Now hold on tight." and Adam, the knight and the silver horse spun to the sea of sadness. As Adam smelled the salty air he thought This is not happening.

How'd you like it? Tell me on the new poll.